Essay 1: 1st sentence of 3rd paragraph: In this mind set, Eliot names off many examples of how life was once simpler, in order to support her message 1st sentence of fourth paragraph: Eliot also uses imagery to help prove her point. 1st sentence of final paragraph: George Eliot defends the way of the past by captivating the present and taking the audience through a very intimate example.
2nd essay: 2-3 lines of first paragraph: We are more connected to each other now than at any other point in history. To remain an ever changing world, authors write pieces in order to catalyst new ideas between human beings.
Last line of 3rd paragraph: The symbolic saving at the end with breast milk also shows the little hope that these families clenched onto through times of hardship.
Good essays, the only complaint I have wouldn't matter in an AP test. I've always had a hard time reading your handwriting....Other than that good structure, good content...I would say a solid 6 or 7
Essay 1:
ReplyDelete1st sentence of 3rd paragraph: In this mind set, Eliot names off many examples of how life was once simpler, in order to support her message
1st sentence of fourth paragraph: Eliot also uses imagery to help prove her point.
1st sentence of final paragraph: George Eliot defends the way of the past by captivating the present and taking the audience through a very intimate example.
2nd essay:
2-3 lines of first paragraph: We are more connected to each other now than at any other point in history. To remain an ever changing world, authors write pieces in order to catalyst new ideas between human beings.
Last line of 3rd paragraph: The symbolic saving at the end with breast milk also shows the little hope that these families clenched onto through times of hardship.
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ReplyDeleteGood essays, the only complaint I have wouldn't matter in an AP test. I've always had a hard time reading your handwriting....Other than that good structure, good content...I would say a solid 6 or 7
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