Sunday, November 25, 2012

Allegory of the Cave Sonnet

Shackled by the restraints of your own mind
In the darkness where only shadows dwell
Trying to break the chains so you might find
A freedom of which you are proud to tell

Others are scared to break out of the mold
Their fears lye in the unknown of the light
Where presides things that are worth more than gold
Such as the knowledge of power and might

The journey may be difficult to take
Light may burn and rain may chill to the bone
But the comfort in the cave is but a fake
Only on the outside can freedom be shown

With some help you can make your way out
To find what this world is truly about






6 comments:

  1. FIRST! Ahem... anyway, you have a good rhyming scheme (no one noticed that you had one line missing from the first stanza). It also makes a clear summary of the allegory in general.

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  2. I like how your poem sounds very sophisticated. You may want to fix the spelling error in the first line. Could you please comment to my blog?

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  3. I really liked it. :) I absolutely LOVE the third stanza. It holds such deep meaning and the rhyming is very well done. Good job on this, Will!

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  4. great sonnet!
    i dont have questions about the book so far.
    my blog is http://danig14.blogspot.com/

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  5. These all rhyme very well. Goodjob.
    Please comment on mine!

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